Thursday, 13 March 2014

Blog #6 Plot Diagram


Blog #5 PEE Chart

PEE Chart
Point
Example
Evidence
The power of corruption.
Some people make people pay to get into places. But the money goes to the local people, not to the government.
“I can check in a moment’ he said. ‘But I think it will be ten thousand pesos. And a receipt – with the governor so busy…”(page 90)
The power of corruption.
Some police can be corrupted and do things there not suppose to. But the people don’t know that, so they do it anyway.
“I remember warm air. I remember suddenly I was out, and the hand holding my arm let go, and I was upside down, held by just one ankle.”(page 63)
The power of corruption.
Some people steal from the government, and other people can get accused.
“What matters is that forty years ago I came upon information that Senator Zapanta had spirited away thirty million dollars of international aid money”(page 102)

Point
Example
Evidence
The effect of poverty.
Poverty can force children to beg of the side of the road.
“I say we should lie low in one of the big tourist areas where so many street kids work and beg.”
The effect of poverty.
Poverty drives poor people to do whatever it takes to earn money including lie.
“later on, my auntie came close and said “why are you telling lies Raphael Fernandez” (page 15)
The effect of poverty.
Poverty affects the ability to go to school to get a proper education, then later on to get a job.
“Behala dumpsite is based loosely on a place Andy visited while living in manila. There is a school there. And there really are children who will crawl through trash forever” (Author’s note)

Blog #4 Character Web